HELLO!!!i want to talk about last sunday's charity concert held in MPBJ auditorium.I WAS PERFORMING ON THAT DAY by using cheerleading.the auditorium was big,and it was CLEAN and COMFORTABLE.Before that,we were doing lots of practices.The leo members provide food to us :) When its about time to PERFORM,everyone started NERVOUS.we were the first one to perform,that means we were the opening.NOT to say others,even me,"AS A senior",i'm nervous too.
When the curtain raise up,my whole body was "MELTING".But it was not that bad,We were nervous but,we still DID a GREAT job :).After perform,we went to change and dress ourselves GOOD.We also watch lots of performance after changing.
I WAS VERY HAPPY ON THAT DAY,I ENJOYED.i really not being sarcastic.We were so TIRED on that day,but we still enjoyed everything that we have SEEN and DID.
I THINK THAT'S ALL FOR THIS POST :) I THINK THIS IS THE SECOND POST ON THIS YEAR. BOOOYAAA!!!
Good job. Keep it up. Check for any mistakes before posting.
ReplyDeleteFor this post, I'd like to point out some errors:
# When its (it was) about time to PERFORM,everyone started (to become) NERVOUS.
# we were the opening (act)
#When the curtain raise up (When the curtains were raised...)
#After perform (performing),we went to change and dress (dressed) ourselves GOOD (replace good with up)
#I WAS VERY HAPPY ON THAT DAY,I ENJOYED(myself)
thank you teacher :)
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